Abstract shards

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CraiG^

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Now that is one of your best pieces yet, if not 1 of your best :O!!!! only fault i;d say is the fullstop
 

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I don't like it at all, and I'm not just saying that to contradict you Craig as I have my own opinion on things.
I really am not keen on this at all, things are too solid for my liking, once again I don't like the scanlines they are too thick and stand out.
All of the text is really good, and the sun in top corner is really cool. I can't really explain why I don't like it for some reason... I think it's the bottom half that spoils it :)

Nowhere near you're best, too full and solid 6/10. I usually love you're work but this one doesn't hit that G Spot ;) :P
 

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w00t84 said:
I think it's the bottom half that spoils it

I think thats the main part by the name :P..

I like this as i'm into sharp things, basically, lal.

7/10

/J34lY
 

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w00t84 said:
I don't like it at all, and I'm not just saying that to contradict you Craig as I have my own opinion on things.
I really am not keen on this at all, things are too solid for my liking, once again I don't like the scanlines they are too thick and stand out.
All of the text is really good, and the sun in top corner is really cool. I can't really explain why I don't like it for some reason... I think it's the bottom half that spoils it :)

Nowhere near you're best, too full and solid 6/10. I usually love you're work but this one doesn't hit that G Spot ;) :P
ever considered the fact it's solid because it's vector?
 

Robert

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Gah lyrical very nice work, woot your jealous your ugly and can never ever value the beauty of a peice 8/10

edit lyrical do you do requests?
 

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i like the text placement / background alot... but the 'abstract shards' at the bottom are not my thing... good pice.. but, imo, 7/10
 

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It looks like you've tried to experiment with a bunch of new techniques and piled in alot of stuff all at once. Too complicated at the bottom to be a simple vector piece...strange but I hope you understand.

Don't like the drippy thing. Don't like the word element flating on the right. Not too sure about the Lyrical at the top. Having said all this, I like it, it appeals to me, which is the main point right? So, mission accomplished Lyrical :)
 

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FUTURA said:
It looks like you've tried to experiment with a bunch of new techniques and piled in alot of stuff all at once. Too complicated at the bottom to be a simple vector piece...strange but I hope you understand.

Don't like the drippy thing. Don't like the word element flating on the right. Not too sure about the Lyrical at the top. Having said all this, I like it, it appeals to me, which is the main point right? So, mission accomplished Lyrical :)
You have a good eye for art FUTURA, you read my piece(s) like a book. Your right, almost all of my work I post on these forums is experimental. I am self taught, and the best way I know of improving on my techniques is by practise.