Autumn Day...

[w00t84]

I am very nervous as to the comments that will be posted about this, I spent a little time doing it. It is made up of all Default Brushes & Fonts, nothing new downloaded. Please no flames as it is the first time I have ever done anything like this, post suggestions on how I could make it better and improvements that can be made

 

[Mask]

sorry but im sick of the use of them 2 brushs. they are overused and overrated.
although it does look nice, but so many ppl have done similar things before.

scrap the brushs

 

[Avicarno]

thats gooooood 8/10 well done m8

 

[Dataforce]

Very nice, and well done, but as Mask said, the default brushes are a bit overused. Still, good piece.

 

[Wittin]

5/10 -

Actually, I'd say this is the worst (in my opinion) I've seen from you lately mate. I feel that the colours are dull and lifeless, you could have eaily used brighter reds/oranges. The overall effect looks bare and empty.

To improve:
- Maybe use a brighter colour pallett
- Add more volume to the grass effect
- Add more detail to the canvas
- Jazz up the text a little more

 

[kud125]

6/10

to call it an "autumn day" it does not include the correct colours, as lyrical said, a lot mroe red/orange should be used
i pretty much agree with everything lyrical said
make the grass a bit more "bushy" and realistic

 

[w00t84]

Thanks for your comments guys, appreciated