Latest one :)

Desire

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To bury man also the bg seem a little dull

Try Sharpening and remove or change the opacity of the blur.
 

czeldabolg

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The blur on Imagine is too much and the text is too small, its a nice render and background though. Might be wiser to make it a little bigger for some reason that just seems to small to me o.0.
 

Shady

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i actualy like it dude

good work

id take abit of the blur off and see what you come out with.
 

Zen2

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The charater needs to stand out abit sharper than the background so it makes it look more 3d and also as said above the text is abit small!

But nice work. Its nice to see something new in this section for once.

/Zen2