Need alot more detail it looks very plain and boring. You went abit mad with the shape too :P Plus i personaly think the town would have been better in the middle of the map.
However nice to see some work being released.
Good Job
/Zen2
I agree with zen, the whole layout and town design etc.. is preety ****, also you lack ALOT of detail, too much open space, also dont use Ginko Tree as a normal tree, not all trees have ribbons around them, also they have sandy bottoms. lso no offense the whole kinda BW river edge things, dont work for me, its too "boxy".
But in all honestly i hate it.... could go somewhere with it, but the current plan and layout to me sucks. I would suggest work on town layouts... make them the bit of the map you look at, because when i look at your map i look at the big open spot..... unless you aimed for that to be your key feature :P. But i feel the town is tucked away, and map is just too empty.
But as zen also said n1 for releasing your work, not even i do that LOL! but im making a mir2 map resources with richens.. so im allowed off :P
P.S if you want some tips, and a updated mir.set pm me your msn, my mir.set will save u alot of hassel.