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Goat

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few siggys iv'e made comment and criticize please
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Goat

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could of gone in to more detail need 2 no how i can improve :P
 

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does no1 know how 2 do constructive criticism :P

what can be improved other then the width n length
 

Prai

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Dont be so ungrateful, You should be honered that people are event posting on this damn thread.
 

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Fine then, Constructive Criticism it is,

The text on grippy really does need to be improved as imo at the moment it is horrible, the "gri" look like they have too much glow on them.

With the first muffin one all is well except the left side, as the right one has a lot going on but the left side lacks it so they clash.

Finally on the die cast one, it's cramped up in the corner. + the DIE itself doesn't look right as the E seems bigger than the D and I making it not quite fit together or in my view. and the cast part needs re-doing all together =p

Hows that?

/Czeldabolg
 
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