Couple of retro designs

smoochy boys on tour

Xanan

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Have been playing around on photoshop trying to use the new retro style thats starting to come into fashion.

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czeldabolg

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1 = Ok i'd give a 6/10 very...simple but the colour. really strains your eyes too much. try a differant colour maybe and it may work out.

2 = horrible. hate it, can't really tell what the **** it is, and looks like a simple job with the pic in the middle. 1/10 cause u made it atleast.

total 7/20

Keep trying :D
 

Xanan

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Its a skateboarder, in a £20 pound note stylee.

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Stonehelm

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The skater-cash idea is quite origional and i think it could work well but it just doesnt go with that piece im afraid.
 

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Both are ****, the both look really really tacky, and there isnt anything special in either apart from some shapes and a pair of gradients.

Whats happened is you confused the word "****" with "retro" and thought that by using "retro" as the style, you could get awat with producing utter crap.
 

Xanan

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Both are ****, the both look really really tacky, and there isnt anything special in either apart from some shapes and a pair of gradients.

Whats happened is you confused the word "****" with "retro" and thought that by using "retro" as the style, you could get awat with producing utter crap.


Cool beans, so what do you rate them, how could i improve them?