use the one nutter made.
you one isnt the best as you probly used paint which is s****... even if you took the black boxes out from behind the text it would look ok but not the best. like i say to all ne people to sig designing or any form of CAD, look a some tutorials, find on you like and try to develop it more. also get you grubby hands on a copy of PS or d/l it from somewhere. use summit like kazaa or imesh or even limewire/pro. they will all provide a good copy of ps. me i use CS which i d/led useing imesh and it is the full version. gl