GraveYard Attempt
- Thread starter Neptune
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- May 24, 2004
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So you should be, it's damn good. Easily your best so far, the composition is spot on. My only gripes are the text looking too simple (I know you're going for simplicity with it and believe me, I'd rather it looked how it does than have it overly stylised but it needs to be more than just white text) and I'm not keen on the dragon but that's more a personal preference.
I love the word attempt.
To me all youve done is clouds the background and added a few brushes.
I think the picture is too busy, youve found a new brushset and tried to fit them all into this siggy.
However its not to say i dont like it, i think its a good effort.
Tip. DeClutter your pieces. And change your text, the whole touching the side umbongo looks aweful. x
To me all youve done is clouds the background and added a few brushes.
I think the picture is too busy, youve found a new brushset and tried to fit them all into this siggy.
However its not to say i dont like it, i think its a good effort.
Tip. DeClutter your pieces. And change your text, the whole touching the side umbongo looks aweful. x
cheers beard bud. im just w8in for my cousin to come bk off holiday so he can show me the effects side of it as the tuts get confusing, u kno reading the ndoing it an bk an forth ect ect.
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Yeah, The 2nd 1 is sweet as, the trees abd grave stones work well and so do the birds. The dragon is ok, but i think it could look better without it? Wanna take the dragon out and see what it looks like then mate? The text is alot better on the 2nd also.
heh thnx bud
not bad for 3am lol wen ya can hardly keep ya eyes open.
i feel this is my best so far
but hey ill beat it sooner or later i hope
agreed with others dragon gone looks alot better , dont look crowded agreed with others , best work so far
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