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Desire

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Well i got told that this forum was really good for getting advice and criticism on designs.

Here a bunch of my latest tags any you guys wanna comment on be my guest ^^

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love em all. but specially love the second one. love the colours. whats with the black line down the side of em all tho? i like it, but whys it there?
 

TxGraphicz

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Well i got told that this forum was really good for getting advice and criticism on designs.

Mate you got lied to. No one here can criticise your work, all you will get is OMFG NICE WELL DONE GOLFSCLAPS. ****ing ****ers.
 

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tsniffer
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you're just jeleous because desire does better work than u :P
 

czeldabolg

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Okay, very nicely done, but there is a few flaws :

On the fifth design of alan walker (guessing it's him) the text seems far too cramped up in the corner, it looks nice but it kind of removes what it could be, i reckon if the text was placed better it could be nicer.

The first one, it's nice but it's too dull, it does not really catch your eye as it's black and white, try it in color perhaps,

The final fantasy one, great job, but the text is barely readable.

The only flaws really bud would be text areas, other than that nicely done, and it's nice to see some posts in this section.

Hope it helps.

/czeldabolg

-edit- Jealy : Jealous. There ya go. Have fun :D
 
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Perebble

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The border on the side looks stupid on some of them. Notably the first, second and last.
Apart from that they're pretty good, except for the last one, imo.
 

Shady

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2nd and last are good but whats with people doing this daft black boxs on left , looks crap.

other then that there all pretty good
 

neptuneshaun

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i like them, they are really good.

the first 1 in black and white isnt brilliant because its "dull", The sonic one is realyl good, but needs brightening imo, and the text doesnt look so good like that. the tekken one needs the text moving up and left slightly (maybe just over the city), the rest i cnt remeber at this point as i didnt realyl look at them :P