Sky Store
- Thread starter Xander
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- Jul 20, 2004
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The design isn't good at all, the colour choice of the clouds is poor, and well, on this particular peice, the "simple" font on the top right of the image doesn't go. The two black lines also don't fit in with the picture (can't really tell why, but they don't).
Gimpasaurus said:
i have read the rules.
and i didnt copie ipixel on some other thread i said that my self so fcuk of p3nis breath
Illumin8, watch your mouth. The work just doesn't look right, theres too many colours and too much contrast. With this kind of design simplicity and minimalism is required. Try adjusting the colours so they're not too much different (maybe different shades of the same colour ?) and get rid of that font, it sticks out too much.
Good luck in improving it.
--Solitude--
Good luck in improving it.
--Solitude--
Xander said:
on image u have, move text to top left and have black line from bottome left to top right. The eye will follow better (i think)
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dont like them black lines
The fonts chosen are **** the colours are **** in whole this is a ****ty image and shouldnt be shown in public as it will make you blind with it's ****tyness.
So to the person that made it fcuk of and die or make something better. If you continue to make **** like that face facts that you are not made to be a designer and do us all a favor and quit.
So to the person that made it fcuk of and die or make something better. If you continue to make **** like that face facts that you are not made to be a designer and do us all a favor and quit.
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overflow said:
Any your skills in constructive criticism are on par with your post
(Try to be more helpful)
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Avoid red and yellow – as they are warning colors
Good try, but it looks nearly as tacky to Sooden's 'retro' signature. Which was compared to a 70's kitchen.
