Bubbles

[michaelj:mrj]

A quick piece. Point out any ways I can improve it, please.

Thanks,

MichaelJ.

 

[Rick-e]

Hmm, I like the font, but what's with the scratches on the main image? They look poo. Also, the slime green colour sucks peepee, make it blue.

Then once you've done all that, would you be so kind as to explain wtf it is? Thanks.

6/10.

 

[Pyraine]

i have a way you can improve it, rename it to 'circles' or make it actually have some bubbles in it

 

[michaelj:mrj]

*****es. Ok, i'll make it blue and get rid of the scratches.