first time attempted sigi

kud125

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hey guyz heres a first attempted sigi (serious one anyways) , i didnt make the current one i own, i know you guys are just going to humiliate me and just laugh me off the graphic design forum, but hey i got nothing to lose

i would like to receive criticial advice please and advice that would help me, saying that is absolute bull**** is just gona scare me away from graphic design so dont try and defend yourself by saying "me saying that is bull**** is critical advice" it really isnt to me it will just put me off designing

anyways enough babbling heres the piece of crap ^_______^
 

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Sawell

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I can't comment on the actual style because it's not to my liking when anyone does it, even if it's done professionally...

But I would say make the text smaller, and drop the numbers... I've always found that people with {name}{number} in their signatures ruins the effect it gives, so try it with just kud and a smaller font.
 

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Not bad...erm, Not very keen on the font i think its to big and doesnt really fit with the baackground, just try different fonts...but background is pretty gud m8

good job
 

kud125

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hmmmmm yeh now i look at it the font does seem rather out of place, i will post another version later after my steak and chips ^______^
 

kud125

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like this version better?
 

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kud125

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i like the plastic style, it suits the background well, im gona have to find a suitable wobbly, jelly-like font :P will find one out later
 

kud125

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im ever so sorry for posting multiple version (sorry mods) but howz this one ^_____^
 

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Eskimo

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The bottom right hand side looks black and plain, fill it up. Otherwise quite nice for your first one. Don't like the colour you chose though.
 

Smila

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ok m8 heres wot to do i like the BG (very nice) the font tis poop. so i would suggest a plainer font in about 8-10 pixels. then place it in the bottom right corner. choose your colour and then set opacity to 75%. hope this makes it look better.

very nice for 1st go tho.
 

anto

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It looks like something that has been cut and pasted, if not it's pretty good.
 

kud125

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hmm.... ok i think i understand o_O, and now it was cut and pasted
 

FUTURA

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Tutorial? Looks like a bogey. It is really bad sorry, the text is terribly placed, the colours are disgusting, the background isn't realyl yours but looks over **** and standard anyways, and the font sucks so-hoooo much d!ck.

use the tut to develop better.
 

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The font sucks... Other than that though erm... i don't really know, i think i would give it a 5/10.