My first Province map

Dave85

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This is one of the first few maps i've made, just wanted to know what ppl thought of it. Feedback would be great, marks out of 10 plz.

Info: this map is currently in use on my server and it is known as 'Moogle Village'. if anyone doesn't know what a moogle is, google it and look for the moogle from Final Fantasy 11 he's the best looking one tbh. The whole of this towns NPC population are moogles so it can get a little confusing about which one does what but they stand by their market stalls to give you some idea.
 
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Wond

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It looks ok for your first map, but it looks very rushed. You have just duplicated any objects you have added in, makes it look very tacky.

4/10 - As I said very rushed looking. Improve it by using different objects rather than the same ones over and over.
 

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killer22

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one other thing ur missing.. border marking, the map will just end without anything 2 guide it as a end..