My First Map

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hey this is my first map i have made will be going in m8s server as a homezone what u all think

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Looking at it, I think its an "inside HomeZone" althugh i've never seen it done before...

1. Why are there buildings on the inside?

2. What is the point of the bridge?

3. It looks like half way thorugh you thought to yourself "Oh S***T, I have a
Few objects in and its looks a bit empty....Hmmm maybe If I add some
absolute pointless buildings etc for no damn reason XD
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4. 2/10 For Produce - The 2 is because its your first, if "Judge" Made
It, It would've been a -1.

5. 2/10 For Effort.

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JoeAshton

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Looking at it, I think its an "inside HomeZone" althugh i've never seen it done before...

1. Why are there buildings on the inside? these will be buyable in game for ur own hosue which u may then sell on to others if wanted

2. What is the point of the bridge? i dont know what the point of u ??

3. It looks like half way thorugh you thought to yourself "Oh S***T, I have a
Few objects in and its looks a bit empty....Hmmm maybe If I add some
absolute pointless buildings etc for no damn reason XD nah i nevery tbh the bulidings at the top will be shops
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4. 2/10 For Produce - The 2 is because its your first, if "Judge" Made
It, It would've been a -1. as i said its my first map and is only a home town so no need to make it huge with loads of deatils ect

5. 2/10 For Effort. lol shut up noob the wall thing is gay had to undo things like 9 times and had to re do like 4 times as would not let me delete sum things ><

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like to see ur first try at a map lol plz post
 

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I see you can't take criticism...Don't post unless you're ready to face the possible consequences =/
 

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atom no offense but that is a mint map for afirst attempt and he is right u cant even make a map.

8/10 for me

wow...all of a sudden people have just become pyscic and suddenly know my thoughts.....or is it that you're both stalking me

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imo Atom , u need to stop being so stuck up , its a gd map as it was someones 1st try - i am talking out of experiance as ive made a few maps imo

This is a very good map and i will give him a 9/10
as no it aint easy to make maps for the 1st time.

He has the walls all joind perfect etc etc and not manny people can do that on there 1st time - even i tryed to get walls done on my 1st time but had no idea lol , so yea over all its a good map and dont listen to sad people who say it is bad because its your 1st time and i bet u be good at makeing more maps.

Over and out.!
 

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I would give:

5/10 Layout
5/10 Effort
8/10 Detail
3/10 Size
8/10 Creativity.
7/10 First Attempt

Overall Rating: 6/10
Percantage: 60%

Bit cramped, And i personally think Atom is kinda of right, on the basis, that you have overdone it, with planting in lot's of Object's in various placement's too fill in the gap's. That would be my professional Opinion.
My advice is too not cement the object's so close to each other, and generally give enough breathing space.
 

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oh ffs, i know about maps, i know what is needed in maps, i dont go on servers and just wander around random ****ing places...

and ffs playboy stfu about the "lost server files" *cough*

you suck.
 

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To be honest its a good first attempt. But its worth nowhere near 9/10.


Imo i would give it 3/10, purely as its his first map.




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it is good as a first attempt, but if it is going to be a homezone, then perhaps i would of used lighter floor tiles,, might get depressing stood there with a dark floor, but thats just me, think i might suffer from SAD. :)
 

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a good first attempt? hes added some walls, then found the object window and added alot of objects. its really not that hard.
 

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i agree with Farphit hes just added a few walls and some objects nothing special....