My First Map

[Zidio]

Looking at it, I think its an "inside HomeZone" althugh i've never seen it done before...

1. Why are there buildings on the inside?

2. What is the point of the bridge?

3. It looks like half way thorugh you thought to yourself "Oh S***T, I have a
Few objects in and its looks a bit empty....Hmmm maybe If I add some
absolute pointless buildings etc for no damn reason XD
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4. 2/10 For Produce - The 2 is because its your first, if "Judge" Made
It, It would've been a -1.

5. 2/10 For Effort.

(No Offence)

harsh.

torozor has an inside sz soo nerrr

effort 7/10

bit nooby looking id say maybe fill the space abit with buildings / objects with no doors. nice first attemp lthough im sure you have made a map b4 :O:blam:

 

[JoeAshton]

nope tha was my first try