for the style i'm not feeling the cymbals, sound too 'tingy' for my liking, well in some places, sounded like your drummer deadened the sound by grabbing the cymbal in places (whatever the technical name is) sounded too quick and disappointed me
vocals need alot more work, sound too scratchy as said earlier
guitar solo section is top though, again though the cymbals would sound alot better if they were a bit deeper especially at the beginning part of the solo section.
around 4:27 and a bit further sounded awesome, top work there.
guitarist has obviously got real skill, shame the vocalist can't match it
overall though, it's quite good mate, nice work.