iMuzik , ipod effect.

Dark12345

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Tried a iPod effect , made everything but the arrows and the girl render.
If anybody has ever done headphones in this effect can someone please say how to do them because i struggled quite a bit doing the headphones.
Also what do you think of the box i made in top left :P. I like it.
On the headphones i tried using the pen tool but i cant work out how to just cut off the pen tool ; it always seems to have to make a full shape (all points must connect).I would look up a tutorial but most of the pro's on here told me not to ever use tutorials.

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kud125

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if you're trying to make this look like the official adverts/posters, get rid of the blur on the right hand side of that girl, the point of the posters are bold colours, and in your face, not faded and blurry...

but if you're going for something a little different then i suppose it is okay, except for the blur on her hair, just makes it look messy..
 

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its good but u dont need the blur + the black arrows imo thay make it look messed up , also pot a white dot as the headset like my ava
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I think it looks cool, is tht supposed to be bass or is it base? jst checkin :d
 

JealY

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It's not bad.

The vector (outline) of the girl needs to be much much sharper, also look into using the pen tool for a much smoother headphone wire.


My iPod wire isn't zigzag'd :P
 

Xander

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made everything but the arrows and the girl render.

The background is arrows and there are two black arrows, plus the render. So you've done the text, the box and the lil box with "ipod + itunes".

or did you mean you didn't do the two black arrows?
 

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looks gd except personally i dont like the fact its pink and the ipod, wire and ear phone look a bit tacky cld do with being done agen.
 

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I don't see much in this, remove the blur effect from the girl and re design the ipod, ear phones and the wire, they look very.. sharp not smooth like an actual wire should be,

and im sure i have seen something similar to this around the forum lol

5/10 :S

Didnt really like it at all sorry.
 

TxGraphicz

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Right now, IF you removed the border and the Itunes whatever and the ipod girl/boy/thing. The background and the two black arrows would look ****ing awesome, I'm guessing they're brushes? But so what You used the brushes and made your own design...

Now, I know its an ipod design so when I say get rid of the one your using.. I mean get another image a more smoother one or a real person, as you can tell thats an anime picture. Make it black and just attempt the Ipod wires again... I'm sure theres a tut on it.... So with that all done... It'd be an awesome image IMO<
 

Dark12345

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Wow u relised that was an anime person , impressive :).

cheers mate for the feedback (thx to all of you)
but especially tx, ill try edit it l8er on 2nite , just for u :P.